You finished your first draft. And for a minute, it felt amazing. But then you open your manuscript to revise, and suddenly everything feels unclear.

Where do you start? What do you fix first? And how do you know if anything you're changing is actually making your story better?

And at a certain point, it starts to feel like the problem might be your draft. But most of the time, it's not. It's the way you're approaching revision.

That's why in this episode, I'm walking you through the five most common revision mistakes I see, because chances are, at least one of them will tell you exactly where your revision is going sideways.

You'll hear me talk about things like:

[02:08] Why starting revisions without a clear target leads to endless changes, second-guessing, and a draft that never improves.

[06:52] The subtle mindset shift that separates drafting from revising and why staying in the wrong mode makes your story harder to evaluate.

[09:37] What most writers skip before they start editing, and how this leads to weeks of changes that don't actually fix anything.

[12:06] Why the order you revise matters more than how much time you put in, and the specific sequence that gets your revision on track.

[14:21] The tricky truth about feedback, when it helps, when it hurts, and why getting it too soon can leave you more stuck than before.

If you've been staring at your draft not knowing where to begin, or rewriting the same chapters, second-guessing every revision decision, or feeling like your draft is getting worse instead of better, this episode is for you.

And if you want help figuring out what your story needs and how to approach revision with a clear plan, my 5-Day Revision Accelerator is designed to do exactly that.

In just five days, you'll learn how to evaluate your manuscript, identify what's not working, and create a clear revision plan so you're not stuck second-guessing every change. Sign up using the link below.

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Discover why the answer to hiring a book editor before querying isn’t a simple yes or no—and how to make the right call for your manuscript.

If you've finished your draft and you're thinking about querying literary agents, you've probably seen this advice: don't hire an editor before you query.

And while that's not wrong, it's also not the full picture.

Because the real issue isn't whether you hire an editor. It's whether you're solving the right problem in your manuscript.

In this episode, I'm breaking down what industry professionals actually mean when they give this advice, the different types of editing (and what each one really does), and how to tell whether your story is truly ready to query (or still needs deeper development).

We'll also talk about why so many writers get stuck in revision, what it looks like to revise with a clear plan instead of guessing, and how to tell if you're improving your sentences… or fixing your story.

This is what I talk about:

[00:47] Why the advice around hiring a book editor before querying is often misunderstood, and how it leads writers to focus on the wrong kind of editing.

[02:33] What literary agents are really evaluating when they read your manuscript—and why polished prose can't fix a story that isn't working.

[03:58] The difference between developmental editing, line editing, and copy editing, and why only one of these directly impacts whether your story works.

[07:45] The common revision trap writers fall into when they can't identify the real problem in their manuscript and how it leads to endless, unfocused rewriting.

[09:15] The 3 key questions to ask yourself before querying so you can tell whether your manuscript needs more polish—or deeper story development.

If you've been stuck wondering whether to hire a book editor or keep revising on your own, I hope this episode gives you the clarity you need to make a smarter decision.

And if you want help diagnosing what's actually not working in your manuscript, my 5-Day Revision Accelerator is designed to do exactly that.

In just five days, you'll identify your manuscript's biggest problems, prioritize what to fix, and walk away with a clear revision plan—so you can go into querying knowing your story is ready (not just hoping it is).

Sign up using the link below.

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Are you revising the same chapters over and over, but nothing you change is actually fixing the problem?

Most writers go straight to the prose when their story isn't working. They tighten sentences, swap out words, and reread the same chapter over and over. And still, something feels off. But most first-draft problems don't occur at the sentence level. They occur at the story level.

In this episode, I share the 10 writing mistakes I see most often in manuscripts. Plus, I’ll give you the diagnostic question for each one so you can pinpoint what's holding your story back and know exactly where to start revising.

Here’s what I talk about:

[01:44] Why some stories start too early and how this common first draft mistake makes readers feel like the real story hasn't begun.

[05:59] The one question every strong story is built around, and how to tell if your manuscript is missing it.

[07:49] Why stories start to feel aimless when the protagonist doesn't have a clear, specific goal driving the action.

[12:10] Why tension collapses when your antagonist is weak or underdeveloped, even when they're present on the page.

[16:23] Why so many novels lose momentum in the middle, and the structural issue that usually causes it.

If you recognize some of these issues in your own manuscript, don't panic. Almost every first draft has a few of these problems. This is a normal part of the writing process.

Revision isn't just about making your sentences prettier; it's about strengthening the foundation of your story so readers can experience the tension, emotion, and meaning you intended. Once you clearly see what's happening in your manuscript, you can start fixing the right things in the right order.

That's exactly what The Revision Accelerator is designed to help you do. In just five days, you'll diagnose what's holding your story back, prioritize what to fix first, and walk away with a clear revision plan without the overwhelm. Click here to join us.

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